Friday, 18 March 2016

Children Should Not Be Able To Wear Mufti            
To School Every Day.
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In my opinion children should not wear mufti to school


The most important reason why children should not wear mufti to school is that if you wear something cool and awesome that costs a lot of money then people could start beating you up for it. If we are wearing the same uniform  then people won't want our stuff because it's the same.


Another point is that it’s much cheaper to buy new uniform because you only really need it every two years as you have grown into it by then.  If you wear mufti to school your parents will have to buy new clothes on a regular basis  because they get ripped,  stolen or lost.


Finally,  it will be a lot of money for your family to keep on buying heaps of mufti clothing, so wearing a school uniform which has less choices will be cheaper for your families.


In conclusion, I strongly agree that children should not wear mufti to school.

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Friday, 26 February 2016

Reflections on Waipara Camp

Reflections on Waipara Camp
WALT work together as a group / team.

The challenge was when it was time for bed because everyone was talking in our bunk room and the adults came in a few times to tell us to go to sleep.

WALT challenge ourselves to take risks

I took a risk by running across the canoes when we were playing a game. It was scary because some people fall off the canoes into the water which was so warm.

Thursday, 11 February 2016

20 things we should say to each other more often


Kid President 11.2.2016
20 things we should say to each other more often


  1. Please
  2. Thank you
  3. No thank you
  4. Yes thank you
  5. I love you
  6. Good morning
  7. Good afternoon
  8. Hello
  9. Good bye
  10. Well done
  11. I disagree with your opinion but I still like you as a person
  12. Your are so helpful
  13. Your kind
  14. Your cool
  15. Do you need help
  16. Can I please play with you?
  17. Great them
  18. Sorry
  19. I will miss you
  20. Are you okay
   

Tuesday, 24 November 2015

Going out for dinner


This is me and my little sister going out for dinner



Friday, 28 August 2015

SPELLING

VOWEL AND CONSONANT.

ALLOW.
WHILE.
BROUGHT . 
ALLOWED.
TRIED.
LUCKILY.


Friday, 24 July 2015

spelling week 1 , term 3

 

my spelling on the 20.07.2015 July
walt spell words we didn't know
now what? practice these words more by using them in my writing.
so what  what I am going to do next is get more spelling words

(1)   by
(2)   off
(3)   or
(4)   very
(5)   before
(6)   everyone
(7)   family
(8)   really
(9)   something
(10)  thought

my next step is :  learn how to spell these words in my book 

Work on Writing Week 1, Term 3

                         Work on Writing

One night I was going for a walk, suddenly I whack into this thing. 
It starts cracking "Run for your life!" I scream. When his stretchy arms grab me I say "Who are you and where did you come from?''
"I came from planet Zorb'' says the monster in an Alien voice. 


Then suddenly he drops me. I look at his ears they look large and pointy. I started running away but the monster caught up to me first and grabbed me with his elastic arms and zipped me home as fast as a bumble bee. 

The next night I went back out for a midnight walk. Then something grabbed me, it was the monster from planet Zorb ."Aaaaaaaaa" I scream. "Get off me". But then he gobbles me down his throat and that is the end of me. 

My next step is: make my story longer