Thursday 31 March 2016

THE AMAZING RUN BIKE RUN DAY


Who:
Kauri team
what:
For fitness
When:
On monday 21 march
Where :
Halswell domain
Why:
For fun
         The amazing KAURI RUN BIKE RUN
THE SUN WAS SCORCHING ON ALL OF THE KAURI STUDENTS ON MONDAY 21ST OF MARCH 2016. THE YEAR SIX STUDENTS ARE FIRST PLAYING THE GAMES THE GAMES WE PLAY ARE FRENCH CRICKET AND TRIKEY TAG IT VERY HOT AS I HAVE ALREADY SAID. FIRST I PLAY FRENCH CRICKET AND THEN AFTER 8 TO 10 MINUTES I PLAY TRIKEY TAG THEN AFTER OUR GAMES WE GO BACK AND THE YEAR 4 PLAY SOME GAMES BUT NOW ITS RACE 2 AND I'M IN RACE 3 SUDDENLY IT RACE 3 COURSE RACE 2 HAS FINISHED THEIR RACE THEN WE START OUR RACE I'M SCARED. BUT I STARTED RUNNING IT TOOK ME ABOUT 5 MINUTES THEN I RUN TO MY BIKE AND PUT MY HELMET ON AND JUMP ON MY BIKE YES I'M HALF WAY DOWN THE TRACK I'M SWEATING SO BAD YAY I'M NOW ON MY SECOND RUN I'M HALF WAY I'M COMING 2ND OH NOW I'M COMING 3RD Because kayla just pasted me. FINALLY I PASSED THE FINISH LINE I JUST ABOUT DEAD AND I'M SO PUFFED YAY ALL OF THE RACES ARE DONE WE ARE DOING THE TROPHIES NOW IT TOOK ALONG TIME TO GIVE OUT THE AWARDS. NOW WE ARE ALL WALKING BACK TO SCHOOL NOW YAY. ALL I NEED IS SOME SHADE AND RAIN PLZ FEWF WE ARE NOW AT THE BIG ROAD WE ALL CROSS TOGETHER AS A GROUP WE ARE NOW AT SCHOOL THEN THE BELL RINGS IT'S TIME TO GO HOME BYE
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Friday 18 March 2016

Children Should Not Be Able To Wear Mufti            
To School Every Day.
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In my opinion children should not wear mufti to school


The most important reason why children should not wear mufti to school is that if you wear something cool and awesome that costs a lot of money then people could start beating you up for it. If we are wearing the same uniform  then people won't want our stuff because it's the same.


Another point is that it’s much cheaper to buy new uniform because you only really need it every two years as you have grown into it by then.  If you wear mufti to school your parents will have to buy new clothes on a regular basis  because they get ripped,  stolen or lost.


Finally,  it will be a lot of money for your family to keep on buying heaps of mufti clothing, so wearing a school uniform which has less choices will be cheaper for your families.


In conclusion, I strongly agree that children should not wear mufti to school.

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