Friday, 24 July 2015

spelling week 1 , term 3


my spelling on the 20.07.2015 July
walt spell words we didn't know
now what? practice these words more by using them in my writing.
so what  what I am going to do next is get more spelling words

(1)   by
(2)   off
(3)   or
(4)   very
(5)   before
(6)   everyone
(7)   family
(8)   really
(9)   something
(10)  thought

my next step is :  learn how to spell these words in my book 

Work on Writing Week 1, Term 3

                         Work on Writing

One night I was going for a walk, suddenly I whack into this thing. 
It starts cracking "Run for your life!" I scream. When his stretchy arms grab me I say "Who are you and where did you come from?''
"I came from planet Zorb'' says the monster in an Alien voice. 

Then suddenly he drops me. I look at his ears they look large and pointy. I started running away but the monster caught up to me first and grabbed me with his elastic arms and zipped me home as fast as a bumble bee. 

The next night I went back out for a midnight walk. Then something grabbed me, it was the monster from planet Zorb ."Aaaaaaaaa" I scream. "Get off me". But then he gobbles me down his throat and that is the end of me. 

My next step is: make my story longer