Friday, 26 June 2015

If I had wings

WALT write creatively with lot of descriptive language

so what did I learn ? I learnt how to use onomatopoeia and similes .

now what ? what i need to do next is use more onomatopoeia , similes and descriptive language in my writing .

One night I was getting ready to go to bed .  I new something was going to happen to me . My parents pushed me to get into bed . it was 7: 00 clock when they told me to go to bed I tried to tell them but they didn't belive me . but i  went to bed any way at 6:00 am in the morning i screamed it was scary my mum came running up the narrow  hall way .  trying to fit trough the hall i told mum that i got wings last night because you sent me to bed to early last night . i told my mum that i was going to America . so i then flew out the widow and then i flew 1 hour there and then i drooped and then  i brock my leg .

Tuesday, 16 June 2015

My topic


in inquiry I have been learning about planets and how to Remember the orders the planets go in .

                                                         This is how you do it
                                                                 Step one ?

                                                          My           ➡️Mercury
                                                         Very          ➡️Venues
                                                         Excited      ➡️Earth
                                                         Mum          ➡️Mars
                                                         Just            ➡️Jupiter
                                                         Surved       ➡️Satune
                                                         Us              ➡️Uranus
                                                         Noddles     ➡️Neptune


Creative writing

                                                walt write creative story's 

one night i got a text from my freinds , saying meat us in the middle of the woods. I read the text again i was confused , so i went to the kichien in the morrning and i told my mum and dad that i was going to colege , but that was a lie , i was achiley going to the middle of the woods. it was a long walk my legs were aching , i felt like i was going to full over. i looked all around there is no one here I said to my self , this not fair why would they do this to me they are my true friends but then , I saw this flash of light aaaaaaaaaaaa my eyes I said I fell like I'm blind now , it was a horrible felling I keeped following the hot light flashing in my eyes , I finally got there it was lolly land it was like I was in this dream but this land was not they said there was a legend of this land wow , I started to chomp away there was lots of sugar in theses lollys I started bouncing off the candy canes, i keep walking on there was a lane it was a gooey smushy lane i started swimming when i turned around there was a humungus crocidile it was a big , not that big but big enuf to eat me . it was scary
i was swimming as fast as i could to get away from this best , i was screaming my head off aaaaaaaaaaaa get away from me wacking the beast away from me . i was regreting lieing to my pearnts now i stop swimming ah finilly i get a rest this might be the last time i write a story , then i get chomped up from the beast .

                                                                     the end 

Wednesday, 10 June 2015

My spelling

w.a.l.t to spell right and spell words we don 't know how to spell them.
I learnt how to spell these words because I practiced these words thousands of times
What I need to do next is not get them wrong in my next spelling test

by by by by by by by by by by by by by by by by by by by by by .
i went by the shop and then i saw bread.

off off off off off off off off off off off off off off off off off off off .
i jumped off my bike and brook my leg.

or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or or 
can i have chocolate ice cream or viniler 

very very very very very very very very very very very very very 
i am very cold in winter 

before before before before before before before before before 
before i go to the pool i need my togs

everyone  everyone everyone everyone everyone everyone
i need everyone's comments 

family family family family family family family family family
in my family i have 2 brothers and sisters